You know when you wake up
and go outside,
and can't see three feet in front of your face?
Your entire field of vision
is clouded over
by a dense,
intense,
fog.
(How do people in London see anything?)
The sky has fallen
down to earth.
The sun is gone.
Gravity has finally done us all in.
As a child, you dream about flying.
When you're in a plane,
you want to walk outside
and bounce around
because the clouds look like
the world's comfiest mattress.
(that one in that store window
that I just want to collapse on
because walking makes me go "owie")
Well, you're walking through clouds;
on top of clouds;
underneath clouds;
zig-zag through clouds;
sideways,
backways,
whicheverways through clouds.
You're taking the "great glass elevator"
up and out
(hey, that's a new one)
through oblivion.
There's only one problem here:
You're not flying,
and you're not comfortable
and free.
You're trapped in the world
of someone else's dark, twisted mind,
wandering around
for a way out.
(Blinding sunlight never seemed so appealing)
It's like your world was erased.
God and his mighty eraser.
(But it's an old one.
Too much pencil
has left a disgusting smudge on the paper)
He's that great big cartoonist in the sky.
He thought it would be funny
if you didn't see that car.
Author notes
Inspiration: My utter hatred for fog.
A sudden spurt of retardedness (no offense) has led me to write this bit of ridiculous nonsense about why I absolute hate the fog. Seriously, I like to be able to see. I can barely see as it is, and I would like to know when a car is about to come out of the fog and hit me.
I felt like being stupid okay? Am I knot allowed?
(^_^)
Comments and ratings are appreciated I suppose. Maybe if you really want to.
Sincerely Yours, and Forever More,
ModernXTimes
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"Gravity has finally done us all in"
That bastard! I knew it was up to something. -
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Nobody believes me when I say so either. They're all like "gravity's good. we don't fly away"
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They don't want to fly? No one watches Peter Pan anymore... flying =happiness. ^_^
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People don't believe in faries
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Nooooooooooooooooooo!
I do believe in fairies, I do,I do!
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LMAO
ok, well this sucks. I messed up this comment. Well let me say one thing first. You are so weird "owie?" Who says that in a poem.... ever? haha and the last 2 lines... omg, those were hilarious! haha, now it seems I can't stop laughing. I loved parts if your poem like when it seemed to go into a picture and what not. Ummm... some of the things you said about actually being in the fog made sense and made me think (which right now actually takes a lot of time) Anyway, you think this is enough to get 8 points? I would hope so.
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Alex
hehe
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