Silent screams echo chambers of my mind,
fading from existence, all thoughts of time.
Endless boundaries surround pieces of my soul,
nothing left, nothing right, my sanity they stole.
Whispers creep from nowhere, haunting memories,
held captive in these blank whirlwind frenzies.
Slowly dying out by the paranoia that I hear,
listless in mind and body, feeling what I fear.
Edged upon the darkness in a tunnel of pure light,
silent screams echo, into the deepness of the night.
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Prompt:
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Beautifully done!
Such a great take on the prompt...Excellent...
Lynda
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great job my dear friend such sadness and lost hope in the crevaces of our minds xxx well done xx
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awesome job here.
best of luck to you in the contest.
great rhyme.
Tory -
Powerful words.
Loved the rhymes.
Nice
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Very powerful write. Very nice take on the picture. I like this a lot! I like how the beginning and ending lines relate.
"Whispers creep from nowhere, haunting memories,
held captive in these blank whirlwind frenzies."
Those are my favorite lines! Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Prompt is up.
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Well hello there.
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