Meet me 'neath the Willow tree
As the Cypress whispers gently
And the stars twinkle gaily
And the moon shines bright above
Grant me one last dance
One last chance for love
Meet me by the white Birch tree
Where the river giggles past
And the wind, it sighs in peace
And the mountains sing above
Grant me one last dance
One last chance for love
Meet me at the fire-ring
Beside your lover's lake
For of my heart, I shall give,
If only you shall take
Please grant me one last dance -
One last chance for love...
Author notes
For WH, with all my love.
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A contest entry
- 19 to 25 enter your best prewrites Judged by RedwingSpirit.
850 points, ended January 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies to Gold (or silver or bronze) by whispernthedark.
440 points, ended February 2, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Gorgeous Write
Thank you for entering this into my contest I wish you the best of luck
Redwing Spirit
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Great wording. Lovely write. I enjoyed it a lot.
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STUNNING WRITING!!!
STUNNING WRITING. I LOVE IT. THE IMAGERY THE FLOW THE WORDS, EVERYTHING. BRILLIANT WRITING HERE.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE
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oh gosh I am a sucker for love poems and this is one of the best love poems I have read in a long time. Wonderfully written and it paints a picture in my head. Love it!
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