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Lost Daughter's Plea

I am lost without you daddy
Don't you see
I need you here by my side
Holding me when I am crying

I am lost without you daddy
Don't you see
I need your touch
To ease all the pain

I am lost without you daddy
Don't you see
I am nothing
Just another misfortune child

I am lost without you daddy
Don't you see
I had no one to turn to
When my life went upside down

I am lost without out daddy
Don't you see
I am nothing without you
You were my everything
(11-21-02)

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  • xHeartofDarknessx
    September 9, 2007

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    awwehh =[ so sad
    love the way its writen
    it all sounds so perfect i wouldnt change anyof it
    I am lost without out daddy
    Don't you see
    I am nothing without youis the best art
    anfd the Dont you see
    makes it so emotinal
    xBx