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This is just something that came to me last night (09-22-03).
No particular reason. BTW, you have to view it from a Catholic bent.
I'm not Catholic, for what it's worth.
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Written September 23rd, 2003
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This definitly grabs attention. Not sure if you meant it to seem like the church is saving the whores, or if it is mocking catholics. Either way, thought provoking and attention grabbing, even for the illiterate!
Jake -
I think God would want you to have sex.but nice poem!The flow kind of creeped me out!bye
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Bleeding Cross
i like the way it looks. its just so deep and dark. im not real big on church if anyone is religious. sorry, but all my faith got sucked out over all the death ive seen. but this just speaks to me. very good job, find this amusing in a twisted way i like. -Thorn -
Like the visual concept (figured out the catholic angel, what with the cross and the communion). I liked it though, despite its twistdness. Never seen poetry that could make communion seem smutty before!
~Faded -
nice work.. interesting.
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It makes me think,,,really hard! lol Nice work. Aimee
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That was a really creative fucking idea. It is also very beautiful in desing and color. i think you really have a piece of art here. Some might really be offened by it though...:0) Visauls and everything are in CHECK
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very interesting concept...it has a dark and eerie sense about it which i think really grabbed my attention
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cool... I like the visual, er... the visuals.
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It's different, it's creative and expressive.. what more is poetry about? I don't have to like what is symbolized, but I felt I needed to acknowledge your creativenss.
GypsyDreamer -
Rather creepy ..
You don't have to tell us to see it with a catholic bent .. it is clearly catholic .. the cross, the communion.
There is something incredibly creepy to me about some zealot's tendencies to almost get off on their judgementalness .. get off in a sexual way. I've run into them before. There is nothing that makes me feel like taking a shower more than an encounter with something like that.
Ugh .. the poem captured, I think, what you wanted.
Edited on Sep 25, 4:51 p.m. because 'don't really know my catholic terminology.'.
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