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Polaris Victory King Pin

What I love more than anything in this world
is very simple, but rather than telling you
I'm going to share how deeply embedded
into my soul she really is.

She's as black as night, but
glows with a majestic beauty of the moon,
waltzing across the heavens and she
sparkles with the brilliance of the stars.

Day or night her beauty
captivates everyone's heart.
They cannot help themselves, but
their eyes are locked on her sensuous curves.

A longing desire
to slowly trace your fingers
down her silky smooth skin and,
feel her beauty truly reaching into their soul.

But I alone
possess the key
to make my true love
purrrr like no other.

I slowly get on top of her and
slide it into to her special place.
Playing with her controls and
pushing her buttons just the right way.

I insert a magical key
and give it a nice little twist
then play with her controls more until
I feel her power between my legs

I put her in gear,
slowly twist the throttle
and release her clutch,
then we are off.

Hitting the open road together
we navigate the curves of the road
enjoying the beauty of Mother Nature
in this moment we become one.

She has the unique power
to free my heart and soul,
from the pressures of life and
she will forever be apart of me.

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Author notes

Yes this is my baby. I love taking her for nice long rides as she loves to take me.

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  • sinenic
    September 12, 2007
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    WOW

    I'm glad i knew what you were talking about in this poem... You can make it so sensual! HOT !!!!


  • ThresholdofInsomnia
    September 11, 2007

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    Lol, I liked this one... I know a man who is a slave to his motorcycle, so I get it. Brilliant, you had me going there!
    Anne


  • Marctheman
    September 11, 2007

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    wow, i don't ride, but i know some people that do, the love for a toy like this is just unreal, let say you deserved that trophy.  This is a great piece


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    September 11, 2007
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    I love the way you speak of your motorbike in such tender words...she must mean so much to you. If I promise to hold on tight and never let go will you take me for a ride? I am sure she and I would get on very well and together we could make it a ride you would never forget...
    Congratulations on winning the gold in this contest


    Much love
    Em


  • Lily of the Valley
    September 10, 2007

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    I can truly appreciate the love you feel for the other woman in your life Ed. What exhilarating thrills she must give you She has the most sumptuous curves, perfect tone and looks to stun any man into submission. I'll go so far as to say she stuns me too lol. If only I could have a body like that!!

    It's been many years since I had a beautiful girl like that but she was no where near as full bodied as your baby but the thrills (and spills) she gave me are something i'll never forget. The day I had to let her go was one of the saddest in my life and there have been many times I wished I hadn't done it. Once you have experienced a girl like that nothing can compare with it.

    I love the way you wrote so passionately about your baby and I hope she continues to bring you much happiness. Look after her and she'll look after you, just as my baby did.

    Does your baby want me to take a back seat? lol


  • Sonja
    September 10, 2007

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    When I start to read it it was some other things on my mind ...
    ....and then I saw what you are talking about. Congratulation for wining gold.
    ~Sonja~


  • Jadeheart 41
    September 10, 2007

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    She is beautiful for sure! I know this feeling all to well and miss that freedom to explore and enjoy all it has to offer. What magical memories and awesome tales she must offer you! For who could resist such beauty?


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    September 10, 2007

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    Congrats on the Gold Ed I can tell where you are coming from on this write Nothing beats the freedom of being out on the open road. The freedom it brings is way beyond compare. Very well penned write


  • manty
    September 10, 2007
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    Hehehe, excellent write Ed, very witty as in the beginning one thinks you are talking about a woman I also have had the joys of owning a good looking & fast machine (tho mine was a car not a bike)...And oh my, how they really do have the ability to make you feel so free


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 9, 2007

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    lol, clever and creative, it was a good poem i like it, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest, i see why it took gold


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    Lurve the other woman...cylinders and all...
    Clutch in for a pause and throttle open was wonderful!!
    Nice Ride mate!!!


  • Dragons Lady
    September 9, 2007

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    First, I absolutely love the bike. The poem is very well written. The imagery is very nice. I can relate to the feeling in this. There's nothing like the freedom of riding on a bike. Well done and deserving of the gold. Love it.


  • pearl-dragon
    September 9, 2007
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    Now I can say Congratulations on a well deserved Gold Your words jumped off the page at me and I could feel the love you have for your 'other woman' I am happy that you have her there with you because I know how much she helps you to escape to another time and place.




  • Lady Ireland gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    What beautiful personification!
    You did good in this one Ed, Gold!
    You deserved it for this excellent poem.

    You senualised it brillianly.
    Slán Dolores xx


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 9, 2007

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    Hmmm, you've painted an even better picture than I have before known her. Quite the sexy thing you got going there.
    Now if only I could find her male counterpart!
    Congrats on the gold, well deserved!
    Storm


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 9, 2007

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    i should have known what this was about BEFOREmy mind went to places better off untouched great write and congrats on the gold hun be well and be blessed


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 9, 2007

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    Great Write!!!

    Well at first I thought it may be your rifle. Then I thought it was a woman then I realized your motorcyle. I do know how you love to ride it. A wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. You keep enjoying it. Ride like the wind!! Take care, Sandy


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 9, 2007

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    Knowing you as I do...I just knew this was a bike I love it!...But I alone posses the key to make my true love purr...Then that magical key O' my Thank you love, I really enjoyed it


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    wow she sure tunes you into her majestic ways, performance depends on the treatment you share,I see she rules you rather nicely... good luck in the contest..MM


  • pearl-dragon
    September 9, 2007
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    Thank you for your entry. I love your words and I really love your motorbike.

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