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Looking For Something That Can't Be Found
Turning My Life And The World Upside Down
Embracing The Chaos That Surrounds
Amidst The Masses Your Vision A Guide
Between You And Me In Darkness Confide

When Night Claims Me Sweet Serenity's
Embrace Your Body Next To Mine
All Thought Displaced Morning Light
Interrupts Leaving Hints Of Your Taste

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written 10.10.05

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  • JinSays gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Embracing The Chaos That Surrounds
    Amidst The Masses Your Vision A Guide
    Between You And Me In Darkness Confide

    you're one of those writers that forces me to use my brain. Fabulous lines, and leaves alot to the imagination...very very cool.
    I miss using my brain, when I read some of these writes...lol
    Jin


  • ellipsist
    September 11, 2007
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    very nice... dark

    but with kind of a gentle touch... love those last two lines


  • DevinCora
    September 9, 2007

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    Oh it is so beautiful!!!! Is this an erotic poem, cuz it feels like it with the words that you used....any ways it dont matter, its still beautiful!!!!


    ♥