With terror-filled eyes,
She attacks lacking reason.
No being is spared.
Author notes
Some say "ed" verbs are two syllables, but I chose to use them anyway in this piece, so, yeah...
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I can't stop watching this.
It's completely mad.
I want to make one of these!.
Excellent
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A video...amazing have to try that one day
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Only two syllables if the ed is pronounced separately - not in either case here. Another haiku/senryu. Now with video - wow!
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very funny! i love it.
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This is a hiaku with a video! I never saw a poem with a video before. I guess Im out of the loop. But thats ok.
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It's really fun; you should make one!
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I like the haiku. From the root, authentic
haiku doesn't have to be a standard 5-7-5.
It is translated from Asian glyphics, and so
syllables aren't as critical. Long as it is between
about 13-17 characters in total.
Again. A good one!
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Oh, gosh. My granddaughter is still waiting for something to happen.
A funny eeker!
she said, " I like it". Don't think she knows why she does.
LOL
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wow. i look so freekin different now.
this is so freekin halarious yo!
nice poem as well.
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