Pleasure
Hot, excited
Pleasing, soothing, overwhelming
Breathless, tenderness, soreness, roughness
Numbing, throbbing, burning
Weakened, aroused
Pain
Author notes
Here is the Poetry form
A Diamante is a seven-lined contrast poem set up in a diamond shape. The first line begins with a
noun/subject, and second line contains two adjectives that describe the beginning noun. The third line
contains three words ending in -ing relating to the noun/subject. The forth line contains two words that
describe the noun/subject and two that describe the closing synonym/antonym. If using an antonym for
the ending, this is where the shift should occur. In the fifth line are three more -ing words describing
the ending antonym/synonym, and the sixth are two more adjectives describing the ending
antonym/synonym. The last line ends with the first noun's antonym or synonym.
In a list
A contest entry
- Bold, Beautiful and Bawdy by Touchof1der.
700 points, ended September 18, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so much spoken with so few words here. thank you for sharing htis new form with me tonight. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you - these forms are fun
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I am quite familiar with this form as I have taken a class in it. The words choices, individually, paint vibrant images, but placed together it doesn't seem to have a smooth blending. I dunno. Maybe it's just me. I'll have to come back to this again. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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the form is done nicely but all the words are supposed to be describing words? best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you. No the Diamante is set up like this.
Here is a diagram.
Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subect
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subect
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subect, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject
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ouch...
lol... might have been a little too rough...
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yeah a little
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what a beautiful form you have penned...and your words excite the little heart...Good luck in the contest...you are good!
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Thank you - I'm playing with forms so they will start showing up. And ditto for the good part
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