Is anyone trying to find me ?
For I am lost
Lost to all my emotions
Eating away inside my head
For I can no longer trust you
Through all of your lies
How much I love you
Calling your name
Hurt becomes my unbearable pain
Bitten and chewed poison apple to taste
Is anyone trying to find me ?
For I am so alone
Sleepless nights I toss and I turn
Thoughts to forgive you
Fold heavy in my heart
Pillow scents of your presence felt
Did you ever love me
Or was that a lie too?
When we made love
Was it real
Is anyone trying to find me ?
For I am confused
Wearing my heart on this old woolen sleeve
Shall I keep my distance
Or float back towards you
Someone give me direction so I can follow you
Author notes
Pain etched reflects an image of the wounds that heal in time,...
A contest entry
- Open Wounds by Eugene Cash Hensley.
700 points, ended November 26, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest for Cheaters by BigE.
450 points, ended May 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sometimes it's easier to just run away and hope, cry + wait for him or her to "find you" but in my philosophy that's no way to live... i don't know about you, I'm guessing you too agree from the author's note... best wishes 2 u 2^^
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sometimes i feel this way lost and confused, but it is only momentary, as i tend to take each breath minute one at a time, that way life is measured and garunteed, though it all could end in a sec, fate can't be measured lol.
Excellent poem both passionate and tender, and sorrowful at the same time,very emotionally woven.
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lovely poem strong and full of power good write
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Wonderful imagery. I love the second stanza, truly paints pictures inside my head. Then again so does the third .
Again, something different than your other writes, And I must admit that I prefer your latest poems. Truly beautifully written .
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Thank you I appreciate your comments.
J
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