I want to sleep where,
Thunder is paid to strike twice.
A sleep made common,
Even among children standing on shaking stools
I don't want to hear again
About how the heart races to the beat of the boiling blood
As body and soul fulfill the desire of the tired flesh.
I will not hear of it again until I have arrived
To where the cracked walls glare at my naked frame
This is the night's dream,
Crossing into the border
I'm full of questions and I'm dying to see
The answers when your inhibitions are free
This is the night's dream,
Crossing into the border
...Into reality
Seconds of pleasure are a serious business
Without it minutes, hours, centuries
Would fade away not even worth the passage of history.
It sits on the highest throne of madness to claim;
The golden touch of lips drooling on body's every corner,
Is worth choking through the annals of poverty.
Well show me to the throne room
Everyone's planning "with who" and "how"
In the same bad dream I cry "please, why not now?"
This is the night's dream,
Crossing into the border
I'm full of questions and I'm dying to see
The answers when your inhibitions are free
This is the night's dream,
Crossing into the border
...Into reality
A contest entry
- Prewrites that dont suck. by parachute fog.
400 points, ended October 20, 2007, 93 entries
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Comments
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Excellent work, very poetic. A beautifully written, heartfelt piece I think, good luck in the contest,
Floorboards.

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really good
hey i thought this was really awesome, i think everyone kind of remembers what it was like to be a virgin but it doesn't last forever, your time comes when it feels like it, if i can put it that way lol! But as a note, remember "Thunder" is spelt without the "B".
i do like the imagery and i'll say well done on an impressive write.
Regards,
Rachel.


