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haiku.

i will unravel
every last cotton thread
of the ties that bind

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every is three syllables right?

please,

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  • Dakotatron
    September 17, 2007

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    This is like when I hear a 20 second song. It catches me and has me under it's spell for such short amount of time. At the end, it just leaves me waiting for more.

  • Westley
    September 16, 2007

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    I like this. It is simple and yet contains so much more and can be relevant for each person as we all have ties that bind us to something. I feel like I am doing much the same, looking at my life and the things that I am attached to.




  • lysdarling
    September 13, 2007
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    i would say so. this is a pretty haiku. hope you're having a wonderful day!
    -lys


  • cheaphotelsign
    September 9, 2007

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    wow! you have put a world in a dozen words. this says so much to me. i needed to read this today. well done and thank you!