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Of Flies and Men

Why should not every fly deserve an epitaph,
distinctive niche retain to archive its descent
and glorify each strain, chart gene-I-Us ascent,
to measure time thereby upon a six foot graph ?

Why should each tail-less Man detail pathetic trace,
pollute the atmosphere with ashes, crush the grass
beneath a heavy bier, hard headstone coup de grâce
though ‘R.I.P.’ aside would [st(r)]etch his tale of grace ?  

If life is chrysalid between two karmic dreams
why care a tinker’s curse for hearse or ashes spread,
or passing sigh rehearse, then in time’s web all bed
sums all – kid, spell, sell, bid, knell, hid, - hubbub’s extremes.


Time flies with wings nor sect, nor insect may restrain,
rhyme sighs: ‘Time’s stings respect !’ yet stay telomeres’ strain.

 

Author notes

Telomere : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Telomere


Alexandrine Sonnet with internal ryhme at hemistiche i.e. every sixth syllable rhymes with its tandem abba

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    I need to learn styles and this one is new to me.
    The humble fly with all this glory
    In simple mind, this is wonderful
    Julie

  • ea silver member
    September 17, 2007
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  • montiebatmom
    September 9, 2007

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    Why should not every fly deserve an epitaph

    I love this. I don't think I've ever seen such a beautiful epitaph written, especially for a manhating fly. Brava!!!