I know im being played
But there is nothing i can do
He has the hots for everyone
Not just me and you
You see that i fancy him
And ask me what i think
In my opinion, hes is just
A waste of pretty ink
A drawing on the pavement
Or a sketch in someones life
He will never settle down
And never take a wife
I know im being played
But still i like him, its true
You and i will carry on
Not knowing what to do
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything by californiagirl.
300 points, ended September 20, 2007, 31 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Good write. Thank you for your entry!
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OH MY GOSH
That perfectly, perfectly explains something that's been going on with me!!! Amazing, well written, and TRUE!! This DOES happen in real life, and I hope it isn't real for you too!
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Unfortunately, it ias also real for me too, but I am not sure what to do about it. I wish you the best of luck with Your dilemma. Thankyou for the comment, Z xx
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"But still i like him, its true
You and i will carry on
Not knowing what to do"
what a great ending! The whole poem was good but I would like to dedicate this comment to saying how much I liked the end.
Keep up the good work
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Thankyou for your comment, it is greatly appreciated. Z x
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