This is a Haiku.
It has seven syllables
sandwiched between five.
Author notes
*laughs* ... Sorry. I had to do it.
A contest entry
- JUST ONE SINGLE HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended September 15, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Why do birds suddenly appear everytime you are near?
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You sarcastic noodle!
Though then again even the mad are sometimes related to wise.
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Ha, that's good. Awesome!
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You know what? This in its text is a very good senryu and I got a lovely giggle out of this poem thank you so much.
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nicely written
good luck with this contest
for he is hard to please.
Riftkin -
lol well done - it deff gave me a chuckle xx
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lol. can't take that away from you. Great way for newcomers to learn mind! Hahahahahahaha
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