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Pleading the Fifth Book: 5:7 & 6:5 (a tribute to Deuteronomy)

~Break my heart from what break yours,
for I enclose nothing more than what you have
untied in me~
(everything).


God, more beautiful than earths’ brittle quandaries,
kissed your artful soul that touched my many fires.
As you are my daily waking love, my love, and
are my gift of gifts and heart of hearts,
I will

on my struggling feet,

and with my sweetest,

deepest aches of faith,

never faint, taint, nor despair of rhyme or time.


Break my heart from what breaks yours.

 

First for you, most of all, first for you.

 

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  • CherryOnTop
    November 4, 2007
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    Very well penned.


  • Redstormy gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    I love that title Timo. PLeading the fifth,
    I'm good at that myself. Beautiful tribute to
    love. You know you believe in it more than I do.
    Lovely write


  • cherche -d -ame
    September 9, 2007

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    the beauty of this lies not only in you pledging this to someone else, but just as much in you resolving within yourself never to show your "ugly". Very soft and loving piece
    much love
    xoxoxoxo
    reenie


  • anaisnais
    September 9, 2007
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    aaaaawww this is so very touching and beautiful. Wonderfully penned. Inspiring. Love it!!