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What's Your Choice

I’ve been walking down this road happily for years
But suddenly it’s split into two
Which path do I take?
The one I take, the home I choose
Will affect everything that is going to happen in my life

The decision can never be right
Although one day it may be wrong
But once I choose my path there is no going back
It wont matter what I decide
For both paths come to the same destination
Slowly I take a step forward

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  • Vania
    September 11, 2007

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    we choose a path that seems right, we follow many different paths, and in teh end we all end up dead.
    loved the poem, keep walking forward, and dont look back!!! great write kiddo!!!
    keep writing!


  • Walking Tall
    September 10, 2007

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    it's true
    ... "we're all going the same direction, in a million different ways"
    every road ends up in the same place...
    it's what happens along the way that makes it special
    SeeJ


  • ShadowsDream
    September 9, 2007

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    this brings to mind something i wrote a while back:

    its my life i'll live it how i choose
    i wont let you choose my fate
    the path i pick is my own
    its the one that will take me home

    u have done a great job with this.
    keep it up!


  • anaisnais
    September 9, 2007
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    Your path my friend is fate; and so it will have its way. Great write.