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(Contest) (Haiku) Love?

Lying in the dark
Hope as broken as my life
Where are you now, Love?

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  • Dark Sidhe
    October 26, 2007

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    Sweet and simple. This is awesome. I love Haiku poems. I keep all of mine on the same page for some reason, though. Anyways, lovely write.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    Very emotional very deep longing for love.
    This is part of the beauty of haiku. The poem you wrote
    I would not consider an actual haiku. But if you read this, t is a poem and very deep and emotional poem with power. I poem I think that can stand as is and still be very good, or it is the beginning of a masterful work of art that it waiting for your muse.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 12, 2007
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    this is a sad
    take for a haiku

    RIftkin


  • anaisnais
    September 9, 2007
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    Aaaawww this is rather sad, but thought provoking. So clever with so few words.