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[ Break into thoughts ]

Break into thoughts
Write whats rotting in that heart
Sicken me with evil
Crawl inside it

Aspire works not composed
Drive the spear into my chest
Touch me softly
Take my hand

Chase the petals in the stream
Taste the water
Dive
Find theres no surface

Hide and don't seek
Find something better
Keep it close
Let it go

Loud silences
Come to a close
Open wide
Take it in

Wander too far
Stay there
Look back
No.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    This is certainly different,some saddness strewn in there,life is full of strife,you sure wrote about it ,thanks for entering and good luck...mm