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Bushels cropped from Bush underhand to no Bush in the land - Spun High Ku does pun

Bush I

Seven years on top:
Burnt out Bush comes a cropper,
reaping his[s] [s]own crop.


Bush  II

Stop lop-sided sop,
vice between I rack, I ran –
one fears freedoms drop

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  • Scopene
    August 17

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    Iraq, Iran, very clever

    You have a very interesting technique, it's so refreshing to see work that has been thought carefully about and penned with passion and enthusiasm. I shall certainly read more of your work.

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  • Trafalger679Curious silver member
    June 23

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    Excellent

    An intriguing write, indeed. I liked it just the way it is. Thanks for sharing this one with us, my friend.

    . Rewarded 4


  • xxkeepxxbleedingxx
    June 22
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    Great poem,
    Its very uniqe.

    I love this.
    Its short.
    ANd simple

  • badddgirl
    September 14, 2007

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    Great entry!

    Very creative my friend, very unique all in its own.
    Great job!
    vice between I rack, I ran –
    one fears freedoms drop

  • HeavenScent4U
    September 9, 2007

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    i like the way you played with your words here, especially in the Bush ll part, very clever best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • waydownuponjoy
    September 9, 2007

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    tactfully shared ...

    and so much left to imagine with your few choice thoughts! Good entry ... joy

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