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How great your works are?

Your creation shouts your name
the day light bears your fame,
loving is your ways and aim,
not burning as in hell of flame.

how great are your works?
My on eyes is blind to see
revile your creation to me
I'm begging lord I'm on my knees.

the sea its self so grand
the sky with millions star in hand,
billions tree upon the land
the land where my very soul stands.
how great are your works?

you are deserving of praise,
Oh, creator of days.
our voice we gladly raise,
for wonderful are your ways.

how great are your works
oh please, revile to me
how great are they ?
let my very eyes see.


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  • stavykm gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Very Beautiful

    Wow this is a beautiful write to the Lord. Your heart is beautiful and your desires to live in his greatness were expressed beautifully with your poem. The imagery was great as well as the flow. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


    • Abner
      April 5, 2008
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      sorry for late reply my net was down..
      but thanks very much for finding delight in my work. thanks alot you are an insparation.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Just LOvely!!!!

    A heartfelt plea for the Lord to reveal himself completely to you and wouldn't that be wonderful??? Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~


  • Meme Wheeler
    March 12, 2008
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    This is wonderful, and a blessing to my soul. Thanks truly for sharing this with us!


    • Abner
      March 17, 2008
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      thanks for you comment..i really do appreciate any source of inspiration.

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