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hope......

i dont want to listen to

 

what others may think

 

or say

 

i will hang on to hope

 

this is the only way

 

for those who do not beleive

 

in miracles

 

or in gods grace

 

all i have is hope

 

this is my way

 

you may call me a romantic

 

or you may call me blind

 

i do not care what you think

 

i will leave you all behind

 

i will run like the wind with your hand in mine

we will run

 

with my hope

 

because this is my way

 

 all of you can be sceptical

 

or realistic

 

i choose to see life in a different way

i will hang on to my hope

 

i dont care what you think or say

 

i know there is a miracle

left and i know in my heart it belongs to you

 

i will put all my hope into this thought

 

because i know it is true

 

for those who dont beleive

 

get out of my life  i want to see you leave

 

i dont need you or your negativity

 

all i want is your hope

 

this

 

 

is

 

 

the

 

only

 

 

way

 

i

can

cope..........

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  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    October 12, 2008
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    wow, i really like this poem. great job ^^


  • LeilaJayne
    September 14, 2008
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    It is always good to have hope, sometimes miracles really do happen! Thanks for entering x


  • angelcalled666
    June 19, 2008
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    strong.



    I adore it.


    Sarah<3

  • dianna
    January 10, 2008

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    great, loved it

    without hope there is nothing, you can always find hope if you look for it. this can help you cope and give strength to carry on

  • michaeline
    November 26, 2007

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    This is really great.You got your feelings out and you chose the perfect words to do it.The words flowed all the way across the page.Loved the way you placed it.Great job.


  • Poetic Rage
    November 19, 2007

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    Hope just to Cope

    Hope is what helps through the dark times when everything is lost and there is nothing left to hang onto but our HOPE.We hope for many things in life some things we could do without some things if we do not get it would hurt us and make us pout.To hope is to believe that there is a chance it maybe a slim chance but a chance that there can be a miracle.




    GREAT WRITE!!!!


  • warrior-eagle
    October 1, 2007

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    I agree.We dont need anybody's negavtivity trying to knock us down, and we do have left hope and that hope to me is the fact that Jesus is soon coming.This was greatly written and i can surely relate to what you say here, " i dont care what you say," I say that same thing. I will not say that people are worthless but i will say that we CAN bring each other down and those in our lives that do that,well good-bye to 'em because in fact i do wanna keep going forward. Good poem.Adore it.


  • freebird88
    September 29, 2007
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    The flow of this poem was outstanding. It emitted such pain, the hope was hard to see, but it made the poem even more intriguing. I think it shows how hard it is sometimes to find hope. Especially among negative people who thrive off of misery. Beautifully written!


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    SO VERY LOVELY!!!!!

    I feel everyone of us have had our share of hardship and pain. We must keep our faith and hope or we will succumb to the terrible things that seem to be in this world today.

  • luvdrkchocolate
    September 12, 2007
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    Oh. This is a very thoughtful poem that you have here. I like how it seems that you're talking directly to me as your reader or something. And I got the feeling from this like you're struggling with pushing forward with your life but that you're also confident that you can make it. I think that's great. You did a good of expressing yourself.


  • individuality gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    while there is hope in the heart and the mind there are smiles to be found in love and life - a good poem

  • PalmettoSky
    September 9, 2007

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    very cool. I think Hope is a very personal thing to have...I once heard that it is the one thing that seperates us as a species from all others...thanks for sharing. Peace and light, Kendal

  • cherchezlafemme
    September 9, 2007

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    WOW this is outstanding and exceptional. Loove these i affirmations! Nice layout. Running like the wind with his hand run with your hope. I like the double space too. Feels like hope is not diminished and there is every reason to dream in larger possibility. Love these lines -
    i know there is a miracle
    left and i know in my heart it belongs to you
    i will put all my hope into this thought
    because i know it is true
    Your poem is about "it will happen". Hope and faith ongoing in your awesome poem!

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