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Pure Love & Devotion...


Sometimes I don't even have to
be near you for me to hear your voice
your buried so deep in my heart
your soft kisses all over my body
even years later,
still give me chills down my spine...


Your fingertips circle my mouth
saying your feeling without a single word
feelings so strong for one another
Not many reach this point in love
with tender touches
so very softly echoing over our bodies....

It is simply your very presence
that lifts my heart from the shadows,
blue eyes sparkling with devotion,
My heart shining with loyalty....

Watching you sleep
I feel peace within myself
the calmness of true completion
sings me to sleep each night...


The beauty you behold
could shine through the darkness
of any heart
so pure and intense...

Reaching out to hold you
as you embrace me
with all the love that you posess
and with everything I am
we are One...

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  • warrior-eagle
    October 15, 2007
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    nice

  • warrior-eagle
    October 2, 2007

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    Mm. I really LOVE this poem but i cant make any exceptions.Please do submit another one that hasnt won anything.


  • BeautifulFlame
    September 20, 2007

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    This was so romantic !!! Beautifully penned !
    I really enjoyed reading this poem
    Thanks for entering!
    ~Lisa~


    • xxlisajazminexx
      September 21, 2007
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      awww thank you sweetie!
      thank you for the honorable meantion!
      it means alot!
      much love!