Sparking jewels
Littered across the dark Skies
Shining like children’s eyes
That light up at the prospect of a treat
Our loved ones shining
Up above us
Always there with us
Watching
Looking after us
Angel wings around us
We feel there love
Each drop of rain a tear drop
From our angels at our pain
Watching comments fall
Across the Skies
Watching the wonders of our night sky’s
Sitting alone looking up never in fear
You’re our lost loves
Are up there
And they are always near
Author notes
http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u235/imsiscokid2/Night%20and%20Starry%20Skies/1046141770_l.jpg
this is my take on this piture
hope its ok
good luck judgeing the contest
im a free member so i couldnt add the pic or i would have
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A contest entry
- Photo Inspired (Rain, Love, Nature, Beaches, The Moon, Sunsets, etc....) by Sally the Ragdoll.
600 points, ended September 23, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
fantastic poem about that picture-you just get better and better at ur poems -keep up good work
ur daddy -
Nice work! Just as an idea, you may want to change "sky's" to "skies".
Keep up the good work, and good luck in the contest!
-Sally -
this was a beautiful take on the picture and you really did an amazing job with it
it really had the right affect
well done and best of luck
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This is really nice. You did an amazing job with this.
Angel wings around us
We feel there love
Each drop of rain a tear drop
From our angels at our pain
Goodluck in this contest
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