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[ Milky swirls rushing at me ]

Milky swirls rushing at me
from the morning coffee mug,
not caused by a condiment,
but from you, crafty you.

Not quite an apparition--
you're still alive and all.
Stubborn memories cry out,
state their case relentlessly.

Intricately woven into mundane
routine, find a way to input.
Please. PLEASE.
Let me forget you.

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http://www.flickr.com/photos/7963424@N08/1153223687

Courtesy Caleb Kimbrough www.calebkimbrough.com

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  • Virgoan
    September 27, 2007

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    The imagery taken as the picture shows is really great. I like the swirling effect that it gives to the readers.

    "Stubborn memories cry out" - love this line.

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    VIRGOAN