The moonlight softly touches your face
Lighting up you magnificent eyes
The warmth of your arms comforts me
Giving me a strong feeling of protection
The way you smile when we kiss
Makes my heart soar among angels
Proving to me that our love is forever
And the gentle tone in your voice
When you speak sweet words and say I love you
Lets me know its all real and that I love you too
A contest entry
- I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended September 10, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that is what life is about true love
you said this so well -
This is a beautiful and captifying write. Its so sweet and romantic. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥ -
This is a very sweet write.
The way you smile when we kiss
Makes my heart soar among angels
Thank you for sharing this.
Goodluck in the contest.
Best Wishes.
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Your sweet and gentle words are well written and honest.
As always, dear daughter, you touch my heart where no one else can. Good luck in the contest!
~Hetha~
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Aw this is so sweet! I love it. It is very ... VERY relatible and very ... VERY well written. Of course ... it was written by one of the greatest poets this world has ever seen. I deffinately think that this is one of my favorites of your seet poems. Great write, Kelcy!!!
Megan
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