I feel upon me your very soul, breath taking are your lips
upon mine
My heart belongs to you for you have placed your finger tips
around it holding it all so gentle making it yours
My reflection in your eye's lingers long beyond the love
we make
As your breath is felt upon me, like blazing fire out of control
I know that it is you I will
always love from this moment on
For beyond you I see nothing
A contest entry
- For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lip tolipto melt
I feel upon me your very soul, breath taking are your lips
upon mine" eye to eye bring lovers together and lip to lip make them melt as one!
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This is definitely something worthy of me adding to my favs. You did a wonderful job with this. The picture, the words, the imagery proclaimed, you did a marvelous job with this. Congrats to winning the Bronze it was well deserved. God bless you my poet friend.
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Delane, very romantic and so sweet!! Young love, I remeber that feeling so long ago. Great job as usual!
I love your poetic mind
GBY
SilverButterfly
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Short-ish piece, but very heartfelt and passionate. It easily conveys the ideas and emotions that it is expressing.
Good write and congrats on bronze.
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Very good. Seems to be deeply felt. Excellent.
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My my.
True love. Wonderful write!
*PEACE*
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Thank you for your comment on my poem
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please check grammar..breath taking is one word
But I feel the overall essence in this write, deep, beautiful -
this was from your heart and very deep
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