A penguin in the artic swimming in the sea
He swam away from the others to be in solitary
He swam and swam and swam and swam until he made it to the end of the ocean
Suddenly the lone penguin started to feel a twirling motion
He got sucked down into only god know's where
Suddenly the lone penguin felt he was covered in hair
"What happended?" yelled the penguin in shock
Then a mysterious voice said "Do not worry penguin Pete you have only been turned into a sock!"
Then the new penguin sock then shouted loud "how do you now my name?"
Then the mysterious voice came again "For I am the penguin god, pezus is my name. For you have sined my penguin brother you have disgraced my rules. That is why I have Turned you into to a sock for you to learn a lesson to never sin again"
Then penguin Pete then asked "May I ask what my sin was and from being a sock what do I have to gain?"
The Penguin God had no reply then finally blurted out "Okay! You have caught me Pete I am the penguin devil! I was bored so I tempted you to come to my lair. Then I tured you into a sock made of dog hair."
Penguin Pete had nothing to say so then he said these words. "In the name of the father the son and the holy spirit amen!"
The penguin devil started to laugh then..
The penguin devil screamed and yelled Then he lay dead in front of petes feet.
He had the turned back to a penguin then Pete yelled "Defeat!"
A contest entry
- THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE ! by Sinnastarr.
550 points, ended September 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me laugh by lilblueeyesmine1978.
425 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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how do you (now) my name?" Should be (know)
For you have (sined) my penguin brother (sinned)
Then I (tured) you into a sock made of dog hair." (turned)
very good otherwise thanks for a great write. and good luck -
I agree with the last comment. This would make a very good story. I liked the flow of this piece very much. I had a smile the whole time I was reading it. I like the concept here.
All and all, an enjoyable read.
Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck. -
Lol. This would probably make a better story than poem, but good job with this one. I liked it. There were a few errors though...But not too many.
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