Nobody knows
the shadowy places under my skin.
Nobody knows
the hot burning desire held within.
Nobody knows
the naughty way I like to play.
Nobody knows
because I like it that way.
Please tell me what you think
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No Body!
ya..No body knows...no body at all...not even nobody126...realy nice play with the words. -
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Here you are again, Nobody126 and thanks for the kind words.Later, AG
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just the way
Well said no body must know
I loved it
Nick
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Thanks, Nick, glad you liked this one. Later, AG
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Nobody knows
because I like it that way.
Well this flow of your poetry belongs to the nature's innocence which ensures that your eyes have no tears yet..I pray you should not ever have the tears in yours eyes and yes..make this beauty of your heart a universal venture..a great piece..well done..
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Hi Mr. Khattar, that's really nice of you to say, the prayer and all. I have shed a tear or two, here and there, but nobody knows, leastways, they didn't til now. Later, AG
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This is great, kinda reminds me of myself, enjoyed reading!
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Hmmm...
Yeah, we all try to hide those fun little shady spots, don't we?...Glad you liked it...Later, AG
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nice
nice , short annd sweet.this is good that nobody knows...at least one has to know...and that one is Anybodys-guess. Good write..is it? nobody knows..ya Nobody!
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Nice name you have, funny that, well, it's about time Nobody knew. The truth always makes you free, least that's what I was always told, not so sure yet but I'm trying. Thanks for taking the time...Later, AG
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