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Unto Your Heart

Missing image

Out of the shadows of the heart of a man

 

A silent voice whispers

 

Come take my hand

 

Unto your heart

 

I will make a stand

 

And show you more love

 

Than the oceans sand

 

Night will turn

 

To a beautiful day

 

As I promise to swoop

 

You softly away

 

Hold you close

 

In a lovers embrace

 

Sweetly kiss

 

The tears

 

 From your face

 

Replace lost emotions

 

With human taste

 

From the shadows of my heart

 

Your love

 

I promise

 

Never to waste...

 

 

 

 

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To my HETANE...

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  • raggyann
    March 25, 2008
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    oh this is beautiful
    you wrote this with so much love
    i love this poem my friend


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      April 15, 2008
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      raggyann

      my sweet firend...this poem was written from the bottom of my heart for my hetane...I am so pleased you enjoyed niaish for your kindness


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    Excellent work Dear. Congratulations on the Gold. Good luck with it in this contest. RedwingSpirit


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 25, 2008
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      RedwingSpirit

      Niaish my friend so much for your kindness and I am pleased you enjoyed my words


  • Nyxs Daughter
    February 25, 2008
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    I love, love poems.
    And I liked this one a lot. ^_^


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 25, 2008
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      DarkKitsunoi

      niaish my little one I am so pleased you enjoyed it.it was written for someone very special


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 15, 2008

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    Sooo very beautiful this is! Sigh...
    Just awesomely and wonderfully romantic
    A fine read this afternoon!
    Congratulations on your gold trophy; much deserved!!

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      January 16, 2008
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      Heavenly Angel

      AWE! Thank you so much and im just thrilled you enjoyed it!It was very easy to write for it flowed from my heart


  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    A beautiful heartfelt write. You express your love so beautifully in this piece. Elegant. Well penned and much enjoyed. Congratulations on winning Gold. Well deserved.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      January 3, 2008
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      ShelleyA

      awe! thank you my friend and so very pleased you enjoyed my words


  • raggyann
    December 29, 2007

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    now this was a top notch poem
    i loved it
    your words captured the pic
    wonderfuly done my friend


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      January 3, 2008
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      raggyann

      Niaish my sweet friend for your kind words, they do touch my heart


  • Shirley Shaw
    December 27, 2007

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    AWESOME''''

    Dear TenderWolf;
    Another Magnificent Piece Of Work From You..Congrats On The Gold Trophy.You Deserve It..This Is Simply Beautiful, Romantic, Passionate,and So Sweet...Love The Picture Too, Goes Perfect With The Poem, Just Like You...."God Be With You MY NetSister & Friend'..Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo........The Neverending Line Of Friendship And Love.............Goes On And On...........Forever..........................................


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      December 30, 2007
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      Shirly Shaw

      Niaish my sweet sister I am so thrilled you enjoyed my words...I do love your comments


  • freespirit51
    December 24, 2007

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    Beautiful my sister. Just beautiful. I can hear you saying these words to him as I read this beautiful piece. The love just flows from your magic pen.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      December 25, 2007
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      freespirit51

      niaish my sweet sister for always being there for me and I do hope yours returns soon


  • Swan song gold member
    December 21, 2007
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    Wow this tugged at my heart cords It carried me off and tumbled me gently with the beautiful words


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      December 22, 2007
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      Swan song

      Thank you so very much my friend...Im so pleased you enjoyed it It is very special to me as well

  • eternal-devotion
    November 15, 2007

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    Beautiful.

    This is truely beautiful. Your thoughts are so delicately spoken and sensitive. Every word speaks with a love sublime. These words are what every person wishes they could hear from the one they love. It is no wonder you recieved gold for this as it is remarkable. I loved every word of it.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 15, 2007
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      eternal-devotion

      AWE!!!!! Thank you so much my sweet friend for the kind words of praise Im so touched by them

  • maggy1126
    November 6, 2007
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    this was so cute... i love it....


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    November 6, 2007

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    My Hemeoone....

    Your words touch deep within this heart, and I sit here with a tear in my eye. Yes, with a compassion stronger than some may realize, My heart is yours.

    You have answered in a way only you could, and expressed to me the sincerity we share as Hemeoone and Hetane.

    Niaish from the bottom of my heart Ne mehotatse.



    yours always

    Silent Cougar.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 6, 2007
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      Mike Howes

      I am so pleased you found my words a comfort to your heart...From my heart to yours!
      Ne mehotatse my Hetane

      ~YOUR TENDER WOLF~

  • Hypocritical Oath
    November 5, 2007

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    Great

    Wow, that's something special. I found myself following it along, almost guessing what came next it spoke to me so clearly. Well done on a truly great piece!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 5, 2007
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      Hypocritical Oath

      AWE! thank you so kindly...I very pleased you enjoyed!...


  • Breaking Inside
    November 5, 2007
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    this is so great! good luck in my contest!


  • Lady Altheia
    October 11, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    Thisi is a beautiful poem. It is one of the most romantic I have ever read. You been hoodwinked by a poetic bandit.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 12, 2007
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      Lady Altheia

      Niaish so much for your kindness and very pleased you enjoyed!...


  • Dragons Lady
    October 10, 2007

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    So much love and devotion felt in your words. I love the imagery you have woven so eloquently into your poem. Well done. I love it.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 11, 2007

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      DarkShadowAngle

      Im so thrilled you loved it!... It means so much to me...Heatne means my man in Cheyenne.


  • Florida Sunshine
    October 10, 2007

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    ~ HOODwinks~

    So many people waste so much~ this is a beautiful poem in more ways then one~


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 11, 2007
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      M Harrison

      Thank you so very much for the kind comment Im pleased you enjoyed it...I just love your picture!

  • midnightblue1272
    September 27, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Now this is truly beautiful! A peaceful & calm work here. Great job.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 28, 2007
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      midnightblue1272

      awe!!! Niaish my friend...Im so very pleased you enjoyed


  • captain howdy
    September 22, 2007
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    such sweet and gentle words! Beautiful writing!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2007
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      Elisabeth Strange

      I am so touched by your kindness and very pleased you enjoyed


  • I will stand by you
    September 11, 2007

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    this is a very sweet poem. Very touching. You did have a misspelled word. beauiful just needs a t after the u and then it will be perfect. This was a perfect poem anyways.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 12, 2007
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      I will stand by you

      Thank you so much my friend and so very pleased you enjoyed it


  • ceegeeess
    September 11, 2007
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    Night will turn



    To a beauiful day



    As I promise to swoop



    You softly away



    Hold you close



    In a lovers embrace



    Sweetly kiss



    The tears



    From your face



    Replace lost emotions



    With human taste



    From the shadows of my heart



    Your love



    I promise



    Never to waste..." A sweet and firm promise of love from deep heart. the pictyre and the writngo it are splendidly beautiful . the picture is beautiful like you, sweet Ann








  • Arizona Sunset
    September 11, 2007
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    so sweet and beautiful, I am blessed that I do have love like that in my life This is wonderful, and I love it!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 11, 2007
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      Rhyming From Rehab

      I am just so pleased you have love so rewarding! niaish for sharing your heart with
      me


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 10, 2007

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    awwwwwww we are really like sisters I just made a poem out of a promise too
    But yours is sooooooooooooooooooo sweet and gentle...full of hope for love...and the picture is just wow...a beauty
    I give you a big hug and hope all you long for is coming to you real soon.....

    Luv ya
    XXJeannette

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 10, 2007
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      Wolf Mistress

      Your comments always brighten my day...Niaish my sister and so proud you enjoyedI wish you a wonderful man to walk into your life and take you waykeeping my eye

  • Bob Fox
    September 10, 2007
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    He

    I am sure he awaits out of the shadow & into your arms

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 10, 2007
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      BobFox

      Bob you do slip around so dont you...My Shadow Keeper lives across the ocean...These are all the things I wish I could give...Thanks for reading


  • Mykeee
    September 9, 2007
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    Your work always seem to sing. softly and from the heart. Nice work once again.


  • tomisb
    September 9, 2007

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    This describes a love that most would go to war for. Those that know they can have such a love will be sure to return it with their own. Those that want it but feel unworthy will hurt you to the bone by walking away in the end because they know it would be a lie to let you love them. Those with no heart will look and see something they can get for free and use and abuse until you see that this is not the one for you because they never knew it the first place what they had.

    Love this pure and clear needs to run with waters just as clear and bright. Love like this can wait and see when the plant is seeded what kind of fruit it bears from its heart. May you be greeted by one who knows and celebrates all the ways that love can grow.

    Love, Tom B.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      tomisb

      You have brought a tear to my eyes my friend...I thank you so very much for your kindness and the wisdom you always give so freely to me...To wait and see the fruit that is ripe is to know what is right...I am touched


  • Little Blue Bird
    September 9, 2007
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    Very nice...

    thoughts. I enjoy reading your work and feel a special bond with you.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      Annie Scott

      I am so happy for your words and I to feel very close to you...Im pleased you enjoyed and thank you so much for just being you


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    September 9, 2007

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    Just a thought, turned into poetry. It just feels great to be able to read such beautiful thoughts....


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      Passionate Knight

      awwww! Thank you kind Knight for the sweet words of praise and thrilled you could feel my thoughts

  • Dragons Lady
    September 9, 2007
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    What a wonderful thought indeed. The picture goes so well with the words you have used. Marvelous imagery and flowing with love and devotion. Very beautiful. Loved it.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      Angel de llan to

      I am so pleased you enjoyed and thank you kindly for the sweet words of praise...they do touch me


  • Ocean Gurl
    September 9, 2007

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    Awwwwwwwwwwww

    Excellent!!!!!! This actually brought tears to my eyes. I'm really crying now there are so many things going on in my life now. *sighs*


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      XBlueX AngleX

      I am so very touched by your comment it brought tears to my eyes Please know I am here if you need me


  • Amera gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    Oh Mom this is beautiful! Your words flow from the mouth to the spirit. This is what Ho'nehe said to me the first time he spoke to me. Beautiful!

    Love,
    Little Blue Star♥

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      Amera

      Little Blue Star Niaish my love...Ho'nehe knows many things that is why we must listen I am so touched you enjoyed


  • anaisnais
    September 9, 2007

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    aaaaawwww, romance is not dead yet, such a lovely write, your words flow beautifully
    thank you for sharing my friend
    Niaish Nihimhinozi

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      anaisnais

      Niaish my nihimhinozi na so very pleased you enjoyed and you are so right love isnt died it is very alive in our hearts

  • freespirit51
    September 8, 2007
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    Such beauty in yor words sear sister. I love the way your words seem to float on the wind and make such a wonderfulk song. Great work my wise sister.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 9, 2007
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      freespirit51

      I am so very pleased you enjoyed,it always warms my heart to read your comments Niaish love!


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    September 8, 2007
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    ^_^

    Hmm...just beautiful...your thoughts make me smile.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      Random Goldfish

      I am so very pleased they made you smile! Thank you love for your kind words


  • arafura gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    never to waste...

    Beautiful and emotional and displaying your warm and gentle heart! The imagery is lovely Wadu Spirit and the whole poems flows so very well...
    Great stuff!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      arafura

      awwww! Im so very pleased you liked...Niaish my Shadow Keeper for watching over me

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    September 8, 2007

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    So beautiful and tender, this has all the showings of how love should feel every day... beautiful sentiments in this piece

    Karen


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      Poetic Whisperer

      I thank you most kindly for your tender words of praise, they mean a lot to me. very happy you enjoyed


  • aliceramone
    September 8, 2007
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    lovely and romantic imagery here that dances on the screen-an excellent piece!


  • Marctheman
    September 8, 2007

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    wow, this is beautiful sister, this piece flow so nicely i feel like you are talking to me directly, i love it great piece.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      Marctheman

      O' NIAISH my BROTHER for your wonderful words of praise they touch me you know I care for you

  • ceegeeess
    September 8, 2007

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    whispers of true love!

    Thoughts on love are like silent music played on the nerves invogouring the flow of blood. Promise made in love isthe greatest gift in love when they are kept up. It is universal that the love resides in the heart. The invitation and promise of care about your lover is so praise worthy and in line with true love. Sensitive true love is depicted very beautiully in your poem ,sweet Ann.The picture is very grand reflecting your thoughts on love.I keep it in my mind as a valued memory


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      ceegeeess

      I am so pleased you enjoyed my words of love...Thank you for the kind words of praise they do mean a lot to me


  • heygoo
    September 8, 2007

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    This is just gorgeous. The words flow so very smoothly as a song in the soul. Brilliant expression of the emotions of the heart. The picture suits you as well...to look upon it is to think "Tender wolf".

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      heygoo

      awwww!thank you so much my sweet sister, for kind words of praise...Im so happy you enjoyed and could feel my words from the heart

  • Arizona Sunset
    September 8, 2007

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    Sentimental, soft flow, I loved the imagery that you put in this poem, another excellent write, thank you for sharing


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      Rhyming From Rehab

      Niaish my friend so very much for your kindness and thrilled you enjoyed


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 8, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem, both for the sentiment and the depth of feeling. If I was lost and alone this is the poem I would want to remember--well done!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      maggiejamespoet

      awww! I am so very pleased you enjoyed it so much...Niaish my sister from my heart


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    Love can spoil you and then again,what else is the emotions for,be there and care,love is to be never ending,good Luck MM


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      misticmoonlite

      thank you sweet one for the wonderful comment and so very pleased that you liked it...


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    there is a very lucky man  within your thoughts,,sighs how i wish i was him..your lover would not waste an emotion to anyone else,,beautiful xxppWink


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      PoorPeter

      Thank you my sweet friend you are so very kind to me Im pleased as peaches you enjoyed


  • Swan song gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    As smooth as silk love very sensuous you crooner you!
    I enjoyed this very much you sang to my heart!!!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 8, 2007
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      jeff swan

      awww! you are so easy to sing to thank you so much for your sweet words...Im touched you enjoyed

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