For You,
I'd paint the wings
of a butterfly,
Or pluck the sun
down from the sky,
I'd weave a rainbow
across your dreams
My love,
Or catch
the glinting starlight
from this night of love,
From a garden
that has no flowers,
I'd pick you a rose
So, in our separate hours
You, could gaze at it,
And there you may see,
In the heart of a rose,
My memory
Author notes
This is for the contest. It is a prewritten poem, I hope that is alright to enter it.
A contest entry
- [[ Unrequited Love and a Longing for You ]] by ThatONEweirdChick.
602 points, ended September 24, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prompt contest by Brokentruth93.
300 points, ended July 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i love it!! thank you for entering!!!
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lovely work...
"In our separate hours....in the heart of a rose ..my memory." That works for me...very sad and sweet. nice write... Mat
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For You,
I'd paint the wings
of a butterfly,
Or pluck the sun
down from the sky,
the best lines...
oml..this is so amazing...you think the most beutiful and delicate thoughts...and you can ut them down so well, something ive always wanted to be able to do... -
omg so nice. I love the rose idea of it. great job writing this. it's so nice! Sad emotions tho, but wonderfully written.
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Lovely verse I wish you luck!
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So romantic, full of deep love and emotion. Love your wording. I like the line...'I'd weave a rainbow across your dreams'. Also love the ending..
'and there you may see
in the heart of the rose
my memory.'
So touching and lovely.
Good luck in your contest.
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This is a very sweet write :
I'd paint the wings
of a butterfly,
Or pluck the sun
down from the sky,
I'd weave a rainbow
across your dreams
Thank you for shairng
Goodluck in the contest.
Best Wishes
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Love knows no sacrifice, yet sacrifice knows no gain all to well.
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Hi Pixie Dust, Thankyou so much for your very kind words on my poem. I'm pleased that you liked it. I do like your name, it's very pretty. Thankyou again All my very best wishes from Rose xxx A
for you x
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Wow...thank you so very much for entering the contest. Your poem is so filled with emotion and the last lines just made me tear in the thought of it all.
"You, could gaze at it,
And there you may see,
In the heart of a rose,
My memory"
Wow..I love it so much. You will surely do very well in my contest! -
This is beautiful and heartfelt. So much love is expressed in this poem.
"I'd weave a rainbow
across your dreams
My love,
Or catch
the glinting starlight
from this night of love" These are my favorite lines!
Great write!!!
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