Her long dark frame required the utmost delicacy
As you traced her spine with your wet orifice
Arriving at the spot she forever loses control
You
Take pleasure in her short spurts of erotic spasms
Spasms that resonated from her sensitive lobes
To her mound of ecstasy
Your
Warm touch embraces her thighs with subtle caution
Traveling, searching for the bosom of passion
Taken residence here, you claim this as
Yours
She concedes as the words are repeated back to you
Your words
Again and again as her voice sings a song of zeal
Zealous lips feed on that which is forbidden
Dripping the nectar of passion
She falls exhausted before
You
Inhale the aroma of her sexuality
Drifting off in to a formless metaphysical dream
The quintessence of souls combining with pleasure and meaning
Where senses speak
Of the pleasure of sound
The ecstasy of taste,
Aroma of desire
The vision of beauty
And the overwhelming feeling of climax
You awaken to feel just that
Her
Body covering you
With warmth, beauty and delight
As you wrap yourself in the comfort of
Your feminine duvet
In a list
A contest entry
- Sublime Seduction--Round One by adsaige.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Be My Valentine (Men Only) by raingoddess.
525 points, ended February 5, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I don't see how I missed this one
Great job...absolutely. Good luck in the contest, sure you will do fine.
Ka~K♥
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Let me hear you say SENSUAL...
I love this piece.
" Body covering you
With warmth, beauty and delight
As you wrap yourself in the comfort of
Your feminine duvet ".
All I can say is WoW !!!
This really should have been an gold.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Very sensual, and erotic. At reading, I can't quite decide whether this was a dream, or reality. But, it makes no difference...waking up with her warm body covering you is all that really matters.
Brazos
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Wow! You truly have a way of describing women, and it's like you see something that nobody else even notice. It's very well written, and I felt a warmth from it. Good job!
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Thank U - I try to see more than most. Women are amazing so If I can find that little difference. I speak to it. I appreciate your kind words as well. Mykeee
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Like I said before you have rocked this write and the sweet sensual tale in verse is totally awesome. You balanced this piece with perfection. Leaving your readers in awe.....write on!...novy
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Thanks again mom!!
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Brilliant metaphor...loved the outline of the piece...
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Thank U so much. I appreciate the time to read my poem
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Sensual & Provocative
Lovable this left me breathless but with a feeling warm conentment.
Lovely feel to it.
Luv ~sweetness~
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Thank u Sweetness
this is where it comes from:
I was out buying a Duvet for my bed and I put this duvet on me that was heavy and so freakin soft that I was like - Damn this feels like a woman after sex and as I awaken, she is resting on me
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Wowzers!!!! That was was quite a sensual ride! Oh My!! Gets right under the skin!!
*hot flushes*
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Thank U so much. It was lovely thoughts.
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Do that shit Kee this is how to do it even though you don't need any advice lol
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Girl U crazy LOL!!- I have sh*t load of these. I just changed up lately. But thank U for the energy!!!
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Yow!
Now this is the proper way to worship the goddess! You have created some wonderful imagery in these moments. Truly a masterful piece, well done! Good luck in the contest! -
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Thank U. Its the smart way I think
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Hot Damn
Hot damn, Baby, you sure know how to make a girls toes curl, and make her panties, opps, did I almost say that, well you do, sizzling hot excellent poem, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Thank U - I was out buying a Duvet for my bed and I put this duvet on me that was heavy and so freakin soft that I was like - Damn this feels like a woman after sex and as I awaken, she is resting on me. It was amazing
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well i think the ladies' comments have said more than i can... still a good write you have here i must say.... hope to see more from you
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Thank U, its my honor to have consenting comments from all of you and yes I hope to return the favor and produce more
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Blazing Read
Excellent write and the sweet sensual tale in verse is totally awesome. You balenced this piece with perfection. Leaving your readers in awe.....write on!...novy
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Thanks novy - its one of my own favorites so I'm glad people enjoy it.
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O' my! you do take a woman's breath away!...flowed like a sensuous dance with red wine in between to moisten the lips
...sighs...can I have my breath back now?You are a winner for sure! Thank you so much for sharing
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I will go with the red wine for sure. Yes my dear - breath freely. Thank U and I'm glad U enjoyed it ~ myKey
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My sweet My-key...this was such a sensual and erotic write. You always do so well writing these. It just filled my senses with such provocative thoughts.
Great job...and good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Flattery will get you your own poem you know
Thank you so much, They do come to me easily, glad to see you back. I missed U. ~ MyKeeee
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wwwwwwwow!!!!!!! this was a very tasting combination of some nice word stimulation. I like this i really would love to read more of all your styles this was hot
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Thank U so much that came from .......... well I better not But Sexuality and sensual eroticism is my trade
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