Shattered thoughts
Persistent fears
Painful screams
How much longer
Can I remain
Do you not realize
That I'm insane?
Author notes
prompt is: Insane
A contest entry
- ~1 day Quickie!!!~ by whatever girl.
300 points, ended September 8, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow!
this said so much in so few lines. brilliantly capture the true essence of "insanity". while reading this for the second time, I could feel the screams and the feeling of being trapped inside my own head.
powerful imagery here. bravo on the honorable mention!!
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good job on the prompt, it can be tough to write given so few words
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oh!!! nice take!!!
i really liked this one
much luck
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This is very deep and sad!
Quite a terrible position for someone to find
him or herself in. Great job with this contest!
You said it all with these twenty words. Good luck
to you with it!
Jeremy0826 -
wow this is amazing, and perfect for only 20words, it goes so well
best of luck, but you don't need it!
stephanie -
I hear yeah. I feel like this alot When you just want everything to stop that no matter what you do it is just making things worst walking in a walk again and again.Goodluck in the contest.
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