Truck driver, O' truck driver
Stop honking at me
You perverted man
I'm not for your glee
You disgusting creep
I'll blow you away
With this gun fully loaded
You do as i say
I'm not for your pleasure
I'm not for your joy
You get what i'm saying
I'm not your damn toy
You better stop whistling
Or turning your head
You do it again
Your goona be dead
Don't blow me kisses
Don't look my way
Just keep your distance
Just stay away
I'm only 15
You fucking creep
So get my point
Stay away from me!
Author notes
I'm tired of those perverts honking and whisteling and blowing me kisses and that other crap! So this is me venting!
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Fourth stanza I think you mean 'going to.'
I don't really care for the end rhyme or centre-alignment, myself.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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wow my thoughts exactly, (not literally tho) I'd be walking with my friend and *honk* we'd both get so annoyed.... good write
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u tell 'em steph, don't let urself be objectified, u deserve much better behavior (also anyone with half a brain knows you act gentlemanly to a lady if u even want her to talk to you)
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Wow This is not a safe world for anyone.This is a very good piece you have written thank you for your entry and good luck to you in the contest.Best Wishes
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Brilliant
That was a superb piece of writing. Full of anger as well. I love the flow of the words. This is written with raw emotion and you caught it just right.
It is a sick world indeed in which some adults are prepared to lust after young kids/teenagers for their own gain. They need to sort out their heads and get a life. Well done for this hun. Keep writing, you are good.
Wayne
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