Forever

I drown in your gaze
Melt in your touch
Burn with our passion
Never did I think I would live in a world of romantic clichés

You kiss me
One kiss to free my inhibitions
One kiss to make me weak
One kiss and I'm yours

And when I'm in your arms
Yesterday didn't happen
Tomorrow doesn't exist
And this moment is the only infinate thing

I don't need tomorrow

I'd rather have now, forever...

Author notes

Romantic slushy mush, but we all need one of these every now and again! Comment honestly but only constructive criticism please. Long live biscuits!!!!!

A contest entry

I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx. 450 points, ended September 10, 2007, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Anyajoellienne
April 25, 2008
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soft and beautiful
mellow passion love it
PassionsPromise
September 10, 2007

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This indeed was sweet and all. I loved the tender emotions in this piece. vunique and dripping with love for that special someone.
Great job here and congrats on your silver.
Tory
Serene Rose
September 8, 2007

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This is so cute.Its not your style but you are right, every once in awhile these things are perfect.I loved it.It flowed and kept moving really well.I like the thought that it projects.Well done.
xCandieKissesx
September 8, 2007

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Aww!! Ohh my Gawd! This is so adorable. I feel the passion and love flowing through me. This is the type of poem Im looking for and you wrote it perfectly. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥