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Insane

Insightful look at the
Nauseating hidden
Society with inhuman humans
And knowing that
No one can
Explain insanity by themselves

A contest entry

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  • Megan Awesome
    September 8, 2007

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    Im confused lol. But you know me ... that happens alot lol. But from what I understood I did like it. My toung tripped a little on inhuman humas, but that doesn't mean that it's a bad poem.
    Megan


  • whatever girl
    September 8, 2007

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    nice take on the prompt
    i liked this line
    Society with inhuman humans
    very interesting
    good luck


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    this was a beautiful and unique take to the prompt
    i really loved how you got this from the prmpt
    best of luck