Why do you laugh at everything I do?
I have one thing to say,
FUCK YOU!
I don't give a shit any maore
Don't let the knob hit you
When you walk out my door
I'm Tired of you bossing me around
Like you're some God
Who lives high upon a cloud
Eat Shit
You fucking bitch
When you wake at dawn
Don't bother trying to find me
For I shall be gone
Laters Bitch!
Author notes
srry bout the cursing. i was really pissed.
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don't give a shit any maore - perhaps you mean more here rather than maore?
now i know why you were so mean you did not award people with a silver or bronze cup, you are so angry in life and full of hate
i feel sorry for you, i will say a word for you in my mind.
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This is such a great rant. The emotion and anger came jumping out of the words as I was reading it. WEll done and hope you got over it.
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oh yeah. u see this was the point. and yes i got over it. i hated my parents cause i wastreated second best. we talked and we got over it.
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shit.....im scared after reading this....but awesome!
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This poem is awesome! So full anger. I don't let anyone boss me around either. They will get their asses wooped if they do! Well done. I'm bookmarking this one, too.
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wow, that was really different It was very passionate and it made me think twice about ever crossing you. well done!
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this is really good. powerful. havent we all been here sometimes.... hopefully it'll all be good. chin up!
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WOW!!!! The anger really jumped out at me, and the cussing helped a lot. NICE!!!
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pissed more like livid lol, i love the full on approach to this poem. I dont mind the swearing, hell even i use it sometimes lol. great job at venting out your anger, it makes it seem more real.
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