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The Wheels of Insanity!

Turn the wheel
Insanity will go
Come on now
Keep the flow


Insanity
Game of glee
Death will surely be

Author notes

just something small, especially when you only have 20 words, lol!

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  • aguntomyhead
    September 11, 2007
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    this poem rocks!
    keep up the good work girl


  • whatever girl
    September 8, 2007
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    hehe nice and bouncy rhythm which makes it very very easy for me to read
    much luck


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    o0o0o i like this
    it had tha game type feeling to it which leaves you thinking
    beautifully done best of luck