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Pride of a Mighty Nation

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Sitting Bear,

  set in council,

never asking what is fair,

  in his heart a fire burned,

his people hunger,

  life had turned.

to the Great Spirit,

  souls now would yearn,

he must decide,

  the white man to learn.

gone would be his way of life.

  harsh ways,

filled with strife.

  would the white man

always hate,

  that which he could not take?

" PRIDE OF A MIGHTY NATION"

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  • Ann45 gold member
    September 7

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    A warm heart felt write, yet so sad in reality, for the white man has such Answers to give, come judgement day.Clearly lessons have not been learnt for the world is still waging war on itself. I am sorry


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 18
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      Ann45

      niaish so much for your kind understanding...i have always felt what goes around will come around for what man does to man will always come full circle back upon his own head...niaish again dear one


      • Ann45 gold member
        September 18
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        Twilight Panther

        Huni you are Most welcome


  • rite
    July 2
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    The great chiefs all had to face decisions that were impossible to make, because of the systematic and structured homicide committed against the Indian nations. The massacre is still continued in a concealed way until today. There is something extremely powerful that the elite is eager to exterminate in the ancient traditions of Native American Nations. It often becomes clear when reading the speeches of the great chiefs, that hint at tremendous spiritual power, far exceeding the general perception of people. It is the essence of wisdom that will not be deleted even if the elite's efforts will be more extreme than they has been the case up to now. Behind the words in your poem is a huge chunk of omitted history that puts the expression in quite a different perspective for those who are aware of it. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      July 20
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      right

      my friend, it is good to see you once again and to have your wisdom grace my page...for you have seen that which lies within and found the messgae i was longing to share...niaish!


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    June 21

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    the harsh reality for a nation that had all but ran out of time...to assimilate themselves into the white man's culture meant to abandon their own. A very difficult choice indeed. That these leaders maintained their pride and will is testament to their strength. A very enjoyable read.
    Rory

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 22
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      apoeticinjustice

      niaish Rory for the understanding and for seeing the full picture within my words...i am so pleased you enjoyed


  • LittleMoon silver member
    June 7

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    Very few words used and the wise face of a proud man and yet they say their message loud and clear. Very well thought out to do the greatest honour to your First People. Sheila


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 22
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      LittleMoon

      niaish dear one for the kind words of praise and im honored you found them to your likeing


  • An Old Codger gold member
    June 6

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    Wonderful Read

    Great imagery. It brings to mind the many tribal leaders who wrestled with decisions regarding what would be best for their people as their way of life was being taken from them. Sitting in council and discussing all options knowing that many of those options were disappearing. Very touching.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      June 6
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      An Old Codger

      niaish my new friend and honored you have understood my words...for so many of the wise ones tried over and over again to bring peace and just couldnt get it done sad and such a waste of life...


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    June 3

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    I enjoyed this poem, and the deep feelings and emotions it portrays. Thank you for entering my contest.

    Moses


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 26

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    This is such a wonderful write. I love the back ground as well as this beautiful poem.
    Thank tou for sharing and it was a pleasure to read.


  • MysticalRayne
    October 3, 2008
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    Sorry forgot the clappies

  • MysticalRayne
    October 3, 2008
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    As I read this I could actually see myself sitting by and watching this mighty one quiet but full of ideas and pain for his people - thank you for sharing with this piece it was beautiful and very insiteful - Myst


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!

    Very much deserving, this brilliant masterpiece of your pride in our people - it seems I've already commented on this poem a couple of times before, so the system won't allow me to offer any more applause - though I did wish to express my sincere gratitude for this uplifting piece today - the International Day of Peace. Thank you for sharing!!!
    Niaish. ~ Yellow Moom

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 21, 2008
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      Cynthia Gaines

      sweet sister who stands with me and the Nations...this day of peace i do wish could last forever niaish once again for just being you for me


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 16, 2008

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    Now as then the west is still ruled by its greed and its ego and is ignorant to the fact we are all one and the same and are all from the same source. Beautiful descriptive poem and loving tribute to a truly great warrior, which sets me off on my soap box again hehe

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 21, 2008
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      Gd66uk

      sometimes a soap box can be a good thing...thank you my friend for these kind words and the wisdom softly lieing within them

  • GentleSoul
    August 16, 2008

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    I Wonder,

    if this exalted Chief, perhaps already knew the answer to the question you raise? For was he not a great visionary for his people?
    A wonderful poem you have shared here. I do thank you for the rendered thought to reflect upon.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      August 16, 2008
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      GentleSoul

      niaish my brother for the kind words and I do believed this mighty Cheif knew the answers to many things that others didnt wish to hear


  • Katie Lazette
    August 7, 2008

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    Wonderful write Tender Wold. Thank you for sharing with us. Is the picture of the real Sitting Bear? Niaish-Sweet Spirit Mother


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      August 16, 2008
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      Katie Lazette

      yes SWEET SPIRIT MOTHER it is and im pleased you have enjoyed the words


  • sidewinder silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    there some that walk within this world blind....not allowing their heart to see...and yet if they did new wisdom would reach ino their soul


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      August 16, 2008
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      sidewinder

      niaish for your comment and the little piece of wisdom you left behind


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    I feel your pain and know it was so wrong

    I do feel so bad for what the ones who took wrongly and to know it wasnt all the whites yet it was the leaders of this country .Even today they plot at the same greed and uncaring for their own people we see the future as do you in the coming of the greatest warriors ever was and reclaim their land and freedom . Time never stands still and will always be led by fire it seems for the people who knows right from wrong doesnt stand up for others as they should . I AM TRULY SORRY FROM THE DEBTHS OF MY HEART and you will see in time when this nation turns on their own a great reconing indeed


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 26, 2008
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      storiesuntold

      I am so touched by your tender words a little tear looses it's place...niaish for being so careing!


  • Dark Otter
    May 17, 2008

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    I have an idea

    for the next group contest lets honor Native American men and women that made history. Let's get people to really research the live of those that made a difference. I would donate points and enter.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 26, 2008
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      Amazira

      Man Wolf,
      that is a very good idea and I will look into it right away...Niaish for sharing with us all


  • WolfHeart
    May 16, 2008

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    My Great Grandmother knew Sitting Bull. She respected him highly and she foresaw the coming of the end. This is a beautiful tribute to a Sacred Warrior.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 26, 2008
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      WolfHeart

      niaish my sister for the kind words and what a honor to have known such a great man...so touched you shared this with me


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    April 14, 2008
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    This is too true

    Bravo pen on poet

  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Bravo!

    This powerful masterpiece speaks the truth. Yet, not only would the white man hate "that which he could not take," the white man hated everything that was not his own. This was true whether he wanted to take it or not, it made no difference. It seems to have been the sad nature of white man's power and control. Niaish for sharing your thoughts on some truths of life!! I'm sure your family members are just as proud of you, as you are of them, Tender Wolf!!! Peace, Yellow Moon

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 24, 2008
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      Rose of Ireland

      Niaish my sister Yellow Moon for your understanding and kind words I agree with you on all acounts not just for the Indians but all who have been tormented by another race
      I am honored to call you Family


  • Three Doves
    March 5, 2008

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    Oh how I long for a day long since gone where our family was ruled by the Great Spirit. Such a moving piece of poetry you have written truly the pride of a mighty nation. It is with great pride I claim you Mother Spirit

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 5, 2008
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      Noah20Tymatal

      niaish my friend of this heart...i am honored deeply by your words of kindness and the warmth flowing from your heart


  • aliceramone
    March 4, 2008

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    bravo-
    '"would the white man always hate, that which he could not take"-chilling lines there...this is sad yet beautiful filled with great spirit and pride...a brilliant piece!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 4, 2008
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      aliceramone

      I am honored my brother that you found my words to your liking niaish!


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    I LOVE this.
    It was so delightful to read.

    Niaish for sharing.
    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 4, 2008
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      Random Goldfish

      Niaish my sweet friend for your kindness and so pleased you liked


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 27, 2008

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    Excellent piece Dear very hear felt I love your background as well very nice niaish for sharing

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 28, 2008
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      RedwingSpirit

      niaish so much for the kind comment...the words were written to honor a mighty Chief and his love for his people I am so pleased you enjoyed


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 27, 2008
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    I couldn't figure how I had missed this but noticed I commented on this one a while back.


  • ButterflyforChrist
    February 27, 2008

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    A wonderful piece. Very heartfelt. I love the rhyme and flow. The ended was my favorite part. THis is beautiful tribute to Sitting Bear.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 27, 2008
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      ButterflyforChrist

      niaish so much...im honored you enjoyed my sweet young friend


  • ShelleyA gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    A beautiful heartfelt write, tribute and presentation to Sitting Bear. Lovely depth of feeling. Good flow, rhyme and tone. People fear what they don't understand. Excellent closing line. Well penned.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 25, 2008
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      ShelleyA

      niaish my sweet friend so much for the comment and the understanding...I am honored

  • MysticalRayne
    February 25, 2008

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    It is such a shame things happened this way and they were forced to live as they did. As one of those people it is an actual embarassment to our race. At least my heart feels this way. Beautiful write

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 25, 2008
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      MysticalRayne

      niaish my dear friend and i am honored by your words...but let not your heart feel shamed, for a goodness lives within you


  • tomisb
    February 25, 2008

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    The people must live, but is what life when the enemy will not acknowledge your path, that your culture should be honored. Age comes quickly when the weight of your choice will change your people forever. Somehow, he trusted in the strength of the spirit of his people. The spirit did not betray him and it was not lost, in spite of the oppression, the greed created by casinos, the spirit still speaks and becomes clearer as the heart of the world crys for a path to the One that isn't built on shame.

    Love, Tom B.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 25, 2008
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      tomisb

      niaish my MasterPoetotc for the wisdom you have left behind for all to read I am honored my friend


  • Nevel
    February 23, 2008

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    Pride is a real attitude of the soul, it's only good to cherish your pride, I can see how important it is, specially in this time. Niaish for sharing, dear Tenderwolf A beautiful and touching poem.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 23, 2008
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      Nevel

      Niaish my friend for your sweet comment The pride of this mighty Nation still stands as we speak


  • Sandygram
    February 23, 2008

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    A wonderful poem to honor Sitting Bull and to have us remember all he and the Indian Nations endured. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poem with us. Bless you. Sandy

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 23, 2008
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      Sandygram

      Niaish my dear friend Sitting Bear was a powerful Chief and loved his people above his on life...He never made a move without talking all things over with our Father the GREAT SPIRIT I am pleased you enjoyed


  • anaisnais
    February 23, 2008

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    Niaish Ma eno from all your Children, bravo, a wonderful statement piece for the start of your wonderful group. A place where heritage, pride and sharing of nature begins. A nation of hard resolve stands firm on grounds that were once free to roam, there is a resolve in this nation that cannot be broken a sense of belonging ...a part of Mother Earth and Nature within. A lovely inspiring write my friend, Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 23, 2008
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      anaisnais

      My beautiful MorningDove niaish for your words...The pride of the Nations can never be taken, the courage, the faith, the oneness with our Creater...We will always be my dear sister THE REAL PEOPLE


  • Shadoe
    February 22, 2008

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    This is a delight for me to read just now being able to learn and embrace my own heritage. You present a powerful message with these words

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 22, 2008
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      Untamed

      niaish my sweet friend These words of mine only touch a small layer of this Chief's greatness...I am proud you have found them to your liking


  • Amera gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    Niaish for putting this on the reading list. Never let your pride go. This is strong and beautiful.

    Love,
    Little Blue Star

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 22, 2008

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      Amera

      My Little Blue Star
      No worries love for this mother is strong of honor and courage towards her people...My pride of nations runs deep


  • Sunshine Always
    February 22, 2008

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    I see a proud wise and noble soul here in this wonderful picture. One of many great men that the world should have listened to many moons ago..Niaish my friend...mal

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 22, 2008
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      Sunshine Always

      awe!...mal...niaish...the great ones are still our leaders my friend, their wisdom will never go away from our hearts


  • Emile
    February 22, 2008

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    I have already visited this wonderful poem but it is worth a second comment for it engenders the pride of a people nation where honor lives and respect for its heroes remains a beautiful tradition.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 22, 2008
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      Emile

      Niaish my friend and I am honored you have found my words worthy a second visit

  • rite
    February 22, 2008

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    Souls have a choice to be in this plane; many relinquished, but many descended into this world. This world is potentially a dangerous place to be, for it is the realm of the trapped that have no future beyond existence inside a limited set of dimensions and time. It is why this world is fear and greed driven - everything the trapped will ever have, is fated to take place in the time given to these dimensions. Outside it there is nothing for them. However trampled or abused their victims may be (those who refuse to comply with their transient and harsh rule), they can expect better places and times past the limits of this gruesome realm. The elders knew and spent much of their lives trying to make it known to those who were capable of perceiving it. We all feel the power in their words - it has a reason and it is up to all those who understand to contribute to shaping the consequence of the reason that incited the elders to descend into this world. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,

    Chris

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      February 22, 2008
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      sabor a mi

      Niaish my brother for the wisdom you do leave behind for others...The Elders knew and tried hard even with their lives to keep this peace and to share it with others...but due to greed and inner selfishness that innocent way of life fell behind Niaish so much!

  • PureCountry
    February 21, 2008

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    Sitting Bull,

    was perhaps the first Indian Chief, I remember reading of. From the Ghost Dance to his charismatic leadership, his story is fascinating. He, as a man, was quick to know one thing, to always turn to the Great Spirit.

    So rather our backgrounds, or faith a yearning to understand the Creator, is a part of us all. Only He above knows the destiny of any nation and its' appointed time or season. Well Said and Well Written!

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 22, 2008
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      PureCountry

      Niaish Dream Walker... your words are filled with truth and that touches my heart He was a wonderful Chief and leader for his people...Niaish again for the wonderful comment


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    This is a heartfelt write to me
    white man never respected our Mother and her children
    that lived in harmony with her, as if he came from another Planet
    Now he is paying for that and by leacking his woonds
    won`t do him any good
    soon will eat his own flesh
    for our Mother will not provide for him
    well done


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 21, 2008
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      Temple of Aphrodite

      Niaish my brother for your words of wisdom I am honored!


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    Touching

    I have commented on this thoughtful poem before and a rereading of this work touches my heart anew. You have shown us a real Leader, full of wisdom, not pride with the interest of the needs of his people at heart. This honorable man should be revered and respected by all.

    Niaish for sharing this glimpse of the history of the Native peoples of this land. I will honor my Indian family and will stand with them in thier struggle for self determination.

    Your humble brother Gray Elk




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      February 21, 2008
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      Haiku-bless-you

      My Brother and wonderful friend your words do touch me and my heart is close to you always We stand as family


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    Much Insight~

    Thanks for sharing here,
    the background goes great with the poem!
    Keep up the wonders of you!

    Peace, Timothy xo


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      February 20, 2008
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      poeticweaver

      My Pet niaish for your kindness and for just being you to me

  • eternal-devotion
    February 19, 2008

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    Very introspective.

    You have indeed spoken of the harsh way the white man has dealt with the indians and the land that they had lived upon for so very long. I am only part indian but have a lot of respect for thier forfathers before the white man came to this land. Now even a lot of them have gone from the true way to live and take care of each other and the land. I just wish that in so many ways we could go back to before there was so much hate and destruction in our world. There just dosn't seem to be any hope for the future of mankind if we don't change our ways. Good poem and I enjoyed reading it.

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      February 19, 2008
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      eternal-devotion

      my sweet friend your words flow with wisdom...I to wish thngs could be as the old ways were...I feel that even one voice can make a difference if spoken loud enough with a lot of love


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    Great poem with a great message. A wonderful tribute poem to a great leader who, with his diplomacy and skills as a leader would now make (and then too) a great President.

    Comment from member of Niaish Mo eno from all your Children--NIAISH (thank you) always for your beautiful poetry and art and friendship!


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      February 19, 2008
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      maggiejamespoet

      awe! my sister...your words have touched my heart and a soft feeling behind Niaish for your kindness


  • Quiet places
    February 19, 2008

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    Magnificent!!

    Congrats on the group!! This poem is so full of heart and wisdom. The deep responsibilities of a chief come alive in your poem. Excellent job hun! Don


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      February 19, 2008
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      Quiet places

      Niaish my friend for your kind comment and I am so pleased you could hear the old ones wisdom...I am touched


  • GrowlingBear
    February 19, 2008

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    True Nation of the Natives

    Your words bring true feeling to the suffering which this nation has put upon you very Powerful

    Much like the Scots fight against the English during the highland clearances, and the decisions taken by the clan chiefs to save the lifes of their kinsmen

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      February 19, 2008
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      jockhowes

      I agree my brother with your words... as you fight for the freedom of others, your country and the things you stand for, you to see the pride of your nation, they can not touch yours either I stand with you, warrior to warrior


  • tawk gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Your amazing words sis speak the truth. Wonderful imagery and emotion within. Very moving. Powerful!!!


  • good bye
    December 19, 2007
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    POWERFUL


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      December 19, 2007
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      L.a.

      Niaish for the words of understanding...That is what I had wished for it to be

  • Emile
    December 17, 2007
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    Very good

    The pride inherent with being a Native American is due to the strong, wise and charismatic nature of its heros such as Sitting Bear. Your heritage is a rich one where the ancestors stand as roll models and revered patriarchies of your nation. This poem addresses a time when change was inevitable and hard decisions had to be made by a few wise men looking beyond the day and into the future of their people.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      December 18, 2007
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      Emile

      niaish my friend for your wisdom you have left behind and many thanks for your kindness

  • Judith Chandler
    December 7, 2007

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    I really like this. It reminded me of my little nephew who is one quarter Ojibway. I don't think he will get to know much about it.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      December 7, 2007
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      judyjudyjudy

      thank you kindly for your comment and I will pray your little one will learn of his people


  • Shirley Shaw
    December 3, 2007

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    Awesome Poem, And Picture

    I AM VERY TOUCHED AND INSPIRED BY YOUR POEM, AND PIC' ALSO..DID I EVER TELL YOU, I HAVE 'CHEROKEE' INDIAN IN ME???I THINK YOU SAID, YOU DID TOO,AND IT SHOWS, IN THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WAYS...AWESOME AND COOL-WRITE, MY SIS...I GIVE YOU AN AAA+++...LOL...LOVE IT, AND YOU~~~~'GOD BE WITH YOU ALWAYS'...LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW-RAYTOWN,MO....FELIX NAVIDAD~~~~~~~~~~

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      December 7, 2007
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      Shirly Shaw

      AWE! thank you so much for your kind words of prasie...They always mean so much to me...Love to my sweet Sister


  • Moodayo-Okohke silver member
    November 13, 2007

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    I am touch my Princess...your words sting this mans heart...the truth lies harshly in your every word...always hate that which he could not take...Pride Of A Mighty Nation!...I am humbled!

    ~YOUR WARRIOR FIRST~

    BLACK CROW

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      November 13, 2007
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      Moodayo-Okohke

      Your comment warms my heart and reminds me why you chose the life of a great Warrior I am honored to call you friend

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