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Leave it to Boredom to Make a Murderer of me!

Boredom is awful
It's a dreadful thing
So eat up some sugar
And come with me

You'll go O'so crazy
It's really quite fun
Insanity and sugar
And maybe a gun

I'll shoot at your feet
O' dance monkey more
And don't try to flee
You might hit the floor

I'll throw you a bone
If you keep me amused
But if you don't
You'll be of no use

And so from there
Entertainment i'd find
From Skinning your bones
And from that i'd dine

Cannibal you'd think
But O' how contrary
It's really just fun

Please try if you dare

 

So come if your bored

Try to win at my game

There's death to be brought

Or play it insane

 

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  • Ingot
    September 14, 2007

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    Good rhymes, you have really thought about this poem. This is funny to read. Thank you for entering the contest.


  • Tattboyspet
    September 9, 2007

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    lol - this was really good I agree with Wayne the flow was really easy and the words were easy on the eye (so to speak)
    Well done - although I gotta say, I would rather NOT join you in your bored state


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    September 8, 2007
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    thats so awesome this was soooo good good job very awesome and vunny and nice rhyme scheme


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    September 8, 2007

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    BRILLIANT

    BRILLIANT PIECE. I LOVE THE TONGUE IN CHEEK WAY YOU WROTE THIS. I LOVE YOUR RHYME. THE FLOW IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. YOU ARE A VERY SKILLFUL WRITER AND SHOULD CONTINUE TO WRITE.

    WAYNE

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