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insanity

cradling depths of

hurt

misfortune

and torture

all to go the distance
and reach your loving embrace

I love you!

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  • whatever girl
    September 8, 2007

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    nice and simple insanity
    i liked these 2 lines

    all to go the distance
    and reach your loving embrace

    much luck


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    awww this was cute and beautifully taken from the promt
    it was penned with depth and emotion
    well done and best of luck