They call her a sinner, they call her a disgrace
But mess with her and she'll be in your face.
Black leather, metal studs, she's a rebel girl
Never going to be any man's pearl
Screaming out her soul every night
She's finally got it right.
Doesn't need any guy's blessing
Got everyone second guessing
They had said she would fail
But that was just another male
Disapproval because she can't be tamed
Head held high she isn't ashamed
She can have anyone at a blink of an eye
Doesn't need just any guy
She gives them back their very own pill
Then leaves them a dollar bill
They come begging, saying they'll change
They're just a little deranged
For she knows they never have and never will
Every other girl was just a thrill
So she leaves them a puzzle to unfurl
The one, the only REBEL GIRL
A contest entry
- Cool, Independent, Badass Women by So Strange.
900 points, ended September 17, 2007, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha very cool write! this is awesome.
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haha very cool write! this is awesome.
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Amen child, the truth is finally spoken
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AMEN!!!
this is so true, i agree that no girl needs a guy.
im totally bk marking it!
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Amen to that!!! I LOVED this!! well done.I think I'm gonna tell all my friends about this one.
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THE BEST POEM EVER
ahhhhhhh! That was da best poem ever. I totally loved it. ROCK ON! LOL. That girl is bad. I especially loved the ending. One word. Whoa. How the hell does someone come up wit such a great poem. U tell me. Loved it _nora
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Hey Wow Wow Wow! DRIPPIMG WITH ATTITUDE! Love this lots, very avril-esque.
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I FUCKING LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm totally bookmarking it!!!
OMG! JUST LOVE AND AH!
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I LOVED IT
This is what the country needs, more women who go their own way, really it does. Society is so bent on putting women and kids at the bottom that when a woman does rise up above the men she is cast back down to the bottom in fear that she will try to rise again. Very good write and good job.
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