I thought we were good for each other
because we have known each other for a long time
but after things happend with my mother
it felt like you commited a crime.
I thought I would never get over you
but just look at me now
after you seen me with somebody else you knew
and i seen you were in total wow.
I think it's time for me to move on
and do what is good for me
I know it has been so long
but now i finally feel so free.
When i was with you
it felt like i was in jail
there wasnt much i could do
and nobody posted my "bail".
it wasn't that you hit me or beat me
you just never really showed any love
now i am full with glee
and everything above.
Author notes
this is sorta how i am feeling at the moment
A contest entry
- I'm not going to miss you like a child misses there blanket because I've gotta get a move on with my life by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
360 points, ended September 8, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITE CONTEST>>>>BREAK_UPS by PersuingHappyness.
400 points, ended November 2, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1708 entries
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JUDGED
thank you for entering my contest... sorry the comments are so short now.... I have so many poems to read -
Wow. This was a powerful write. I loved the strength behind your lines. Great job!
I especially loved this line-
you just never really showed any love
Simply beautiful. You have done such a great job dear poet
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lmao dont feel bad i went over the linit too b ut had to express my thoughts great job and best of luck to you
Tory -
its over the line limit
the max was 10 lines
but i like this it was beautifully done
so i wont DQ it because i dont have the heart too lol
but this was a deep emotional write
taken beautifully from the prompt
i am always here if you need to talk
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