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Insaneness

The devil's breath
 
  The stench of death

Demon eyes upon me

  Behind closed doors

Leaving me only with wild fears

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Prompt: Insane

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  • goalsv
    September 9, 2007
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    Great discription of the prompt. Congrats on the trophy.


  • whatever girl
    September 8, 2007
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    nicely penned i even kinda saw the demon...kinda scary hehehe
    much luck in the contest


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    wow this was such an intresting take on the prompt and was beautifully penned
    well done and best of luck in the contest