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One by one

One by one
Thoughts rise
But I remain
Thoughtlessly wise

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At the moment, I can only wish for this to be true, but who knows what the future holds.

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  • Maldronah
    September 12, 2007
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    One by one
    they disappear
    There is no one
    left to hear


  • Creatress silver member
    September 12, 2007

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    a nice little puzzle poem that fits together perfectly. I wish this to be true as well. Nice work,
    Creatress