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The Man Inside Of me

who now do i have to be
what can i find
at the end of the tunnel
is there a light
or
barrel of a gun
what is this in me
why am i so hurt
yet so numb
why is it i keep riseing up
when so many others
would of quit
is it to be your super man
your brother
your lover
your hero
your student
or
your teacher
i dont no the answer
but i no
in memroy
life
past
future
for god
for my firends
for my love
i have to stand

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  • your angers a gift
    September 8, 2007

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    well there are a couple of spelling errors...but its really "no" big deal ya "know"...anyway...as far as the poem goes it was pretty well written...I especially loved how it flowed...great write...keep it up