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Raphael

Snarling,
Sniping,
Roguish
Hero.

Attitude fleeting,
Continually prompted by nauseating brothers,
Donning red,
An angry display of menace and valor
As his swiping crescendo of harried attacks
Shows forth immense skill with the sai.



Skulking off into the depths of the sewers,
And daring to venture above ground,
His bravery is veiled only by his arrogance,
Hot-headed,
Cold Blooded,
Thick Shelled.

The lone turtle ranger,
Raphael.

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by TeChNoWC

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  • Vagabond
    September 25, 2007

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    Okay! Contest Closing Time!

    I'd like to say that I had alot of fun on this one, and it was very cool to find so many TMNT fans out there. As always, it would have been more fun of a HUNDRED people had entered... but still, i was surprised by the number of secret teenage mutant ninja turtle geeks that did come out of the woodwork.
    Everyone did a great job anyways, and it was hard to choose the trophy winners. In the end though, i did my best.

    Thanks for entering all, and (of course) Kowabunga


    p.s... why is there no TMNT group on Allpoetry? *insert sighs of unfulfilled desire*


  • Elvenfairy
    September 20, 2007

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    lol I am like raph, in my family I am often called him. See, there are us 4 sibilings, my sister is teh leader, I am the violent maniac who beats up Mikey who has a weird sence of humor, and Don is my brother who is a total math and science geek. Anyways, I like your description of Raph!


    • TeChNoWC
      September 21, 2007
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      Glad you liked it! I love Raph too... Childhood hero! And what an attitude he has


  • Vagabond
    September 8, 2007
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    Great work! Thanks for entering!