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lunar equation



Glowing essence,
embodying gravities hold,
pulls imagination,
illumines fantasizing souls.

A contest entry

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  • Tam
    September 26, 2007

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    Wow...perhaps

    insomnia and foot pain are enticing to your muse, sir? You are really writing well...how do you do this? I can't believe this write isn't wearing Gold...
    short writes are so difficult for me (because I can't shut up...southern woman thang! LOL)
    I love the title...lunar equation....EXCELLENT!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • eyesofanangel524
    September 14, 2007

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    Wonderful imagery in this short and sweet write. You have taken 10 words and used them to the best of best. Congrats on HM..hugs,

  • Virgoan
    September 10, 2007

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    A breathtaking piece considering that 10 words are given only.

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    Awesome

    Wow you have captured the imagination and spurred great imagery within so few words. Very well done dear friend. Best of luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    This was awesome. Enjoyed this piece.
    alot had been said in few words.
    Best of luck to you friend.
    Tory

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