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Hot stuff (Haiku) kinda

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mushy green paste
burning taste buds-
wasabe

glass of ice water
suddenly important-
relief

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Contemporary Haiku/Senryu

In a list

A contest entry

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  • NoWayJo
    September 16, 2007

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    I haven't eaten much of this mushy green paste stuff myself, but I remember my sister having occasion to bite into one of those hot peppers in her dinner. I've learned to fork them to the side of my plate.

    Great haiku-chain entry, Griswold, and thank you!

    Jo


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    Great

    Like this new wave ya got going here,
    such a cool picture with lots of imagery bro.
    Thanks for sharing, peace, poeticweaver.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    this was awsome and so unique
    he he well done....what more can i say
    best of luck


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 8, 2007
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    great job, star said it all.
    best of luck in your contest.
    Tory


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 8, 2007

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    and i thought it was bad making salsa and pica de gallo with half jalapinos and half habaneros as well as the other ingredients -- now thats HOT!!

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