If I can hold on to today, I would let go tomorrow.
The way your embrace keeps me enticed,
The breath from your lips, igniting a flame within me,
I fall into perfect rhythm with your walk of unity.
The lips of sweet surrendering,
I would give myself to keep them from disappearing.
Hands of compassion, gentle to the heart, easier on the soul,
Weak I become by the twinkles in your eyes, I am under your control.
The way your precious heart beats against my chest,
I can easily drift into paradise, seeking the passion of your caress.
Your strength, carrying my weakness to shore, lifting me,
Not for one moment do you back down, you secure my reality.
Keeping my sanity at a balance, you take on the trials,
Hovering in front of me as we travel hell’s path.
Fighting my demons so that I can breathe,
Blocking all evil’s darts, you’d lay down your life to save me.
Why do I love you, well there’s so many reasons why,
I know living without you is not an option to me.
You are my air that I breathe; you are the bandage to my heart,
You’re my shirt when I am cold, and my glue when I’m torn apart.
Within your mighty kiss, I am revived,
Through the breath on my skin, I come alive.
Pain and sorrow disappear; there’s happiness and grace,
A great connection of living and loving written across your face.
So I will hand in tomorrow, just to keep you where you are today,
I would give my soul, if only that would postpone parting of the ways.
I can not imagine living this life without you, my life, my love, my soul,
With all I am, I give myself to you, tomorrow's gone, today I forever hold.
Author notes
love,feelings
A contest entry
- Know What Its Like To Feel?[♥] by WishMeAway--x.
700 points, ended September 12, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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love this poem alot!!!!!!!!!
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wow...definitely this piece is one of the greatest love poems I've read in this site...your poem showed love at its purest form...very captivating indeed...
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this was beautiful beyond beautiful.
and i love the rhyming, it wasnt too pronounced that you could pick it out, but it made this flow beautifully.
finalist for sure.
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Fantastic
I could feel the love in this. Well penned. Good luck! -
this was a beautiful write of the the love you have seen and feel.
it was beautifully done with depth and so much meaning to it
well done and best of luck
love you
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Amazing.....
awwwww you are an amazing loving woman.....this is a beautiful expression of your heart
It's made of pure Gold
XXJeannette
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This is beautifully written of the love you hold for someone dear. I can feel the love pouring from it. I Love You baby...Scott
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Well thank you for showing yours.
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How can I help it? Your the hottest woman on AP!!!
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